在雅思写作中,想要获得高分是有法可循,因为雅思写作题目大都是议论性质的,所以增强写作的表现力,能够在很大程度生提高雅思写作成绩。
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一、避免使用语意弱的“be”动词。
1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。
这个技巧并不是那么容易掌握,但是确实是一个能够提高雅思写组成绩的非常实用的技巧。
例如:
weak:the trees are bare. the grass is brown. the landscape seems drab.
revision:the brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语)
or:the landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (转换为并列结构作后置定语)
2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。
例如:
1) weak:the team members are good players.
revision:the team members play well.
2) weak:one worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness.
revision:one worker's plan eliminates tardiness.
3、在以“here”或“there”开头的句子中,把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。
例如:
1) weak:there is no opportunity for promotion.
revision:no opportunity for promotion exists.
2) weak:here are the books you ordered.
revision:the books you ordered have arrived.
二、多用语意具体的动词,保持句意简洁明了。
这样的具体描写可以让文章看起来更具说服力,当然也就可以提高雅思写作成绩了。
例如:
1、poor:my supervisor went past my desk.
better:my supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.
2、poor:she is a careful shopper.
better:she compares prices and quality.
三、尽量运用主动语态。
之所以要这样做,是因为很多人不明白什么时候该用主动,什么时候该用被动。用错了,当然也就谈不上提高雅思写作成绩了。
例如:
1、weak:the organization has been supported by charity.
better:charity has supported the organization.
2、weak:the biscuits were stacked on a plate.
better:mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.
四、防止使用语意冗长累赘的词语。
想要提高雅思写作成绩就得使写作的用词简单,生动。
例如:
1、wordy:my little sister has a preference for chocolate milk.
improved:my little sister prefers chocolate milk.
2、wordy:we are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations.
improved:we have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation.
3、redundant:we had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.
improved:we had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.
4、redundant:my sister and i bought the same, identical dress in different stores.
improved:my sister and i bought the same dress in different stores.
五、杜绝滥用陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语。
这是语言考试,不是专业考试,提高雅思写作成绩的关键点在语言上,是文章的表现力上!
例如:
1、weak:they will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form.
improved:they will not agree to any of his proposals.
2、weak:i need her financial input before i can guesstimate our expenditures next fall.
improved:i need her financial figures before i can estimate our expenditures next fall.
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